I am (version 2)

By andrew-evans

Wed, 25 Aug 2010
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I am flowing through you,
I fill you up
and you let me out
keeping a rhythm as I go,
sometimes you have to catch me
other times just hold me in,
occasionally I am thin
but mostly I flow strong and fast,
I'm in your blood,
I'm in the sky.
I am the air in your lungs

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Submitted by Beeme on
I read both of the versions. Personally I prefere this version, I really like the imagery. A big well done from me :) Beeme xx

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
I prefer this one too. You have a typo in the third line from the end: I'm in your ...