My get-away

By andrew-evans
Mon, 23 Aug 2010
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Fifteen feet from the ground
I'd say,
no one thought I'd get up here
where the air is ever so slightly clearer,
and all the trees and houses
don't obscure the horizon.
The horizon,
the main reason I'm up here
so I can look out
with nothing in the way,
a clear path from here to there,
no distractions.
I like to imagine
sending my bad thoughts
through that channel of air,
till they burn up in the sun.
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Another great poem Andrew,
Another great poem Andrew, very powerful emotions running through this poem, well done mate!
Lennie
Lennie
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new andrew-evans Full of
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new andrew-evans
Full of peace, love,
and space! well deserved cherry!
I remember once, you said 'can't
spell well, you certainly do now.
julie x
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wow! This is really good in
wow! This is really good in my opinion! Well done on the cherry- richly deserved. Well done :)
Beeme xx
k.
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"Till they burn up in the
"Till they burn up in the sun,"_ Great ending. Great Poem.
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Well done for the cherry
Well done for the cherry mate glad my poem inspired you!
Lennie
Lennie
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Great poem, Andrew. Well
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Great poem, Andrew. Well done on the cherry :)
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