Creation - 2

By animan

Mon, 16 Jun 2008
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... and from force comes courage,
from force attraction.
Crossing through the cool and the dark
comes love,
twinned with fear.
And fear, passing,
feeds anger into life,
to come and always come.
Anger, fear, love, and courage – the
original of all

Certificate U
Poem
Creation
Science fiction

Comments

Submitted by onemorething on
I like this, but I'm not so keen on the last couple of lines...I don't like the banding together of anger, fear, love and courage in one line. I can't explain why at the moment, it just doesn't work for me poetically. I prefer it without the last lines.