Instant
By ankari
Thu, 20 Aug 2009
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I’d never pick you in an instant
I’d never have known how to choose
Yet her face in my mind so insistent
Tells me I'm going to lose
Create as you will
Your fantasy world
In which I've never existed
At all
Imagine at will
Your fantasy world
Where your very own Eve
Created the Fall
I’d never pick you in an instant
And these half dozen months,
Do not count
But given a bit of a reason
That time worn affection would mount
I always say
I’m over you now
So why is it you’re all
I'm talking about?
I constantly remind myself
You’re not worth the effort
And when we talk I know it’s true
In an instant
I’d never pick you
Because
You picked her
In an instant
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I liked this in an instant
I liked this in an instant ;-) 'They' may indeed not be worth the effort, but your piece was!
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I really enjoyed this,
I really enjoyed this, 'they' really arn't worth it, but they are so hard to stop talking about and forget! This poem reflected all these feelings and the last verse finished perfectly. Great work :)
Beeme xx
k.
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This just reminded me of
Permalink Submitted by scarletblue on
This just reminded me of myself. But because of different circumstances, strangely enough.
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