First Desolation Then A Joyous return
By Bradene
Thu, 25 Feb 2010
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Desolation/ A Tetractys
Stir,
wake.
Eyes blink
then focus
upon the new day,
yet no enthusiasm stirs
the blood in anticipation.
Naught to excite the
senses to
even
stir,
wake…
~~~~~~~~~~
A joyous return/ A Triolet
At once I knew of her return
as stealthily she tiptoed in.
T’was then I felt my senses burn
at once I knew of her return.
A joyous moment to discern,
now my re-birthing could begin,
at once I knew of her return
as stealthily she tiptoed in.
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I love both of these little
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I love both of these little gems, Val! That triolet is really something - so well crafted! I know I speak on behalf of the whole of ABC when I say welcome back, we missed you! ;)
Magic xxx
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And I can only echo Magic's
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
And I can only echo Magic's sentiment and comment. It really is smashing to have you back and you have come back with a bang;-)
Tina xxx
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