house painter

By phase2
Thu, 28 Feb 2008
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The first time we looked round
it was like entering the mind of an amnesiac.
Not a new-born
(white would be too intimidating
any mark you made would feel dirty)
but the estate agent's approximation
of blank canvas : magnolia
For months its cool cheeks
kaleidoscoped with colour samples
each settling briefly as a butterfly
till, unable to bear the flat's visual silence
brooding under this clamour of rainbows
we made up our minds
Only to find that, as we peeled off the layers
to make a fresh start (it was built in 1849)
the colours beneath
were precicely those we had chosen
on every surface, in every room
and always had been
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Cracking ending. You can
Cracking ending. You can read so much into this poem or just take it at face value. Second one today that raises the bar.
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