Madness

By Bradene

Fri, 05 Jun 2009
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4 comments
 

Silence dense,
breathing arduous,
lungs release air,
push hard over vocal chords
up to the throat and out
through taut lips;
small screams, fall instantly
plummeting into padded surrounds
Held fast, never to rebound.

Silence suffocates
and sanity recedes

Certificate U
Poem
Experimental Works
Horror

Comments

Submitted by Dynamaso on
What a dark little treat this is - enjoyed it very much.

 

Submitted by Bradene on
Thanks for that, I'm pleased you enjoyed the read. Val x

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Almost frighteningly recognisable; which says a lot about some of the places that I have been in my mind in the past ;) Very well captured Val. At times during my darker days (depression) this was me; minus the padding - ridiculous in hindsight but so real at the time. Good work, you have no idea of the accuracy; I hope! Chris X

Submitted by Bradene on
Thanks Chris, No, never experienced this just my vivd imagination and a prompt word (-; Val x