Restlessness
By Bradene
Sat, 18 Oct 2008
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The tip of your finger
tickles my upturned palm
I wake, a momentary amnesiac.
The morning stamps
through my head
kicking my brain into remembrance.
Your features fall into place
and a groan escapes my mouth
before I can restrain it.
I stretch my lips into
a caricature of a smile
and mime ‘good morning’
Dropping my eyelids
over my disillusion
before you even notice it’s there.
I love you, you feel secure,
so you should be…
It’s not your fault I need more
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This is excellent,the
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This is excellent,the sensation of the poem as a whole is amazing.Lynne.x
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I agree wholeheartedly with
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I agree wholeheartedly with Tamara. Good stuff, as usual, Val:-)
Tina xx
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