Winter Blues A paradel (Another I. P. )
By Bradene
Sat, 27 Nov 2010
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A Paradel (of how I feel this time of year)
Like trees in winter.
Like trees, in winter
With limbs stripped bare.
With limbs stripped, bare.
Like winter trees with bare
stripped limbs,
and cold despair.
And cold, despair!
Reaching out
reaching. Out!
And despair reaching out.
COLD…
For the sun.
For the sun
rays, healing.
Rays! healing
rays.
For the sun- healing rays
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A wonderful play around with
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
A wonderful play around with punctuation, Val! I feel a bit like this at the moment too - but I'm worried I might have to dig myself out to get to lectures on Monday morning at this rate lol Lots of snow in Durham!
Magic xxx
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