Lost and Found

I was drawn by your poem Anusha. It seemed to whisper of freedom and enlightment. I think it is very good but it could be great! Here are a few lines, mostly taken from, or inspired by, your poem, that I hope hint at its promise. How I yearn for the lonesome sea roaring, rolling, perpetually To whom does it call? what does it say? What does it ponder? when does it pray? Ah, I hear you, lonesome sea I hear you call, you call to me. "Come and dance upon my shore dance in my waves for ever more." The shining sea lets the sky enhance Adding Colour to its own vibrance Both bidding me to join their dance I am drawn... as though in a trance To dance, dance, with all that is me Joining the sky and the bright blue sea dance, dance, with all that is me dance 'till I drop 'till I'm finally free! Then I'll float in the warm sea breeze Go where I want and do as I please. Flying high with the white sea birds No longer caught in a sea of words

New Mangone this is absolutely wonderful, the way you have interrpreted it all, definitely goes straight to the heart. well I already tried story on here' called "Lost But Found".Writing group and homeless. I quite liked, as not a writer.Maybe sometime read some my stires or poem's, as your so good turning them around as I don't always put type in correct way,might re; try them as I feel some good. can't get War Horse" loud enough yet tv on for him, and Iv'e got awful! Hearing aid, maybe battery flat. TRY AGAIN TO-MORROW. iS IT YOUR VOICE. I can hear voice good, not words. thanks. julie X Cavalcader (:-.

new Anusha lovely poem.I liked. But may I say inspired by all of it. But do like version other one put on here! I have also done story called "Lost But Found"tried. all the best in future! julie x cavalcader (:-

You are VERY kind Anusha but it is your inspiration that shines through!