Blowy Night
By arfellian
Fri, 29 Jul 2011
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The sky is an ocean at night
and the bare trees like creaking rigging, clawing at the clouds,
ripping them to watery streamers. They dissipate
like spray, leaving just a lick of rain
that sprinkles down like salt.
Orion’s belt shivers in the gale,
the tossing Virginia creaper across the window screeches
a sea shanty and winterworn leaves
flutter down like feathers
or sycamore seeds, helicopters crashing
to the ground while
the moon swims lazily, an island
in the chaos, glimmering like a tear-filled eye
an orb of calm floating by
a million miles outside the blowy night,
the hundred billion heartbeats below
drumming at full cry.
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yeah baby! loved it from
yeah baby! loved it from the first line on... : )
maisie Guess what? I'm still alive!
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What an opening, clouds
Permalink Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
What an opening, clouds being shredded into watery streamers...fantastic and full of powerful imagery.
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Yes indeed - I like the
Permalink Submitted by Luly Whisper on
Yes indeed - I like the vividness of this.
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I like the length of this
I like the length of this tale.
It says so much in a few words.
Worth a cherry I think.
ScoZen
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