Random Summer Moments (April-May 2012)

By asdrawr55

Sat, 08 Sep 2012

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4 comments

A summer day
The road is closed
Now, I can freely ride my bike
Riding fast
The wind in my face
And no troublesome cars in sight

A rainy day
With radiant sun
The weather doesn't make sense
And then I say
"Nice weather we are having"
I say it under false pretense

My cousin's house
How nostalgic
In this house we grew up here
The fond memories
Those carefree days
I still remember them clear

It's 7:00 a.m.
I won't go out
I'll stay all day in my house
Listen to music
Diablo II
And the worldwide web to browse

I'm thinking of it
My future in life
What course am I suppose to take?
In the next month
I'll go to college
A decision that I must make!

Certificate U

Poem

Autobiography

Comments

So many thoughts wandering

Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on Sat, 2012-09-08 10:47

So many thoughts wandering around the mind in this poem, it's good that you could write these thoughts down, I'm sure it helps to sort out where and what to do next. Oh! and good luck for college, whatever you decide to do. Jenny.

Thank you, Jenny and I'm

Permalink Submitted by asdrawr55 on Tue, 2012-09-11 00:50

Thank you, Jenny and I'm doing good with my course (Programming). Though being taught only the concept and not the exam itself takes some getting used to.

I say it under false

Permalink Submitted by Sooz006 on Sat, 2012-09-08 11:50

I say it under false pretense... don't we all, what is our obsession with the weather? ;-) What I really like about this is that you talk about inconsequential nothingness. When all that really matters is that last line. This is simple, it's not wordy or trying to be clever, it is what it is and I like that.

I'm glad that you liked the

Permalink Submitted by asdrawr55 on Tue, 2012-09-11 00:46

I'm glad that you liked the poem. Actually, it was all experimental--It's my first senset poem-- and the inconsequential nothingness is just my attempt at making a complete poem.