While The Sun Is Rising

By beautiful oblivion

Wed, 24 Jun 2015
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Sometimes the feelings burn

And sometimes they freeze

The emotions wither away

Before they bloom

Hate becomes love

Love becomes hate

Twisting and turning

Bending around

Thoughts of another

Thinking of no one

High and low

Falling down and floating up

Things are never as they are

But they should be what they aren't

The world explodes

My mind implodes

Darkness is falling

While the sun is rising

 

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Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

This is a clever look on the confusion and complications of life. I like it. Especially the last couple of lines which give a strong finality to the poem.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.