To No One

Cherry

By Bee

Thu, 20 Feb 2014
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13 comments
 

I took out my silver flute
and played to the sound of the waves
rolling out over the sandy stones
and dragged back again like slaves.
As the tide came billowing in, 
the moon threw light on the sea,
and no one, not even anyone
stood there as lonely as me

playing my silver flute
which rang sobbing notes through the air
with the musical voice of emotion,
to no one, for no one was there.
Only the moon seemed to want me, 
so I played till my heart was at ease,
and the stream of my tears cooled and dried in the breeze
as the sea gently whispered and seethed.

Certificate U
Poem
Autobiography

Comments

Submitted by Starfish Girl on

This is lovely.

What a perfect picture with the sea, the moon and the music easing sorrow.

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you Starfish Girl. I'm really pleased you liked it.

Bee

Submitted by Ray Schaufeld on

Beautiful. lyrical poem, I love the waves 'dragged back again like slaves' it's very original           Elsie

Submitted by Bee on

Thanks Elsie.

Bee

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Bee

Flute music is so mellow and fits perfectly into your backdrop. I feel sorry for the flautist, but you paint a lovely picture none the less.

 

Jean

Jean Day

Submitted by Bee on

T'was I, Jean. I was alone, but for the moon and the sea, and just let it all out - it was so liberating and such a wonderful experience. So pleased you liked it.

Bee

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Such a delicate and wistful poem, Bee, nicely crafted. The backdrop of the moon and the lament of the music highlighting the unhappiness and loneliness.

Luigi

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you, Luigi. I'm really pleased you saw it all.

Bee

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

One of the most lovely poems I have ever read, Bee. More than deserving of its cherries.  Simply beautiful.

Tina

 

Submitted by Bee on

I think this comment of yours is the actual most lovely one I've ever had, Tina.

Thank you so very much.

Bee

Submitted by Bee on

My thanks for the cherries, Eds - so very much appreciated.

Bee

Submitted by RJF on

Magical and melancholy Bee, I love it. R 

 

Submitted by Bee on

Thank you, R. I'm pleased you liked it.

Bee