Christmas Get Together ( I.P.)
By Bradene
Mon, 29 Nov 2010
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You’re in my heart this Christmastide
wishing you all the very best.
Yet I wish we’d stayed side by side
Sister, why couldn’t we just bide
together, and pass times final test.
You’re in my heart this Christmastide,
I know we’ll take our yearly ride
to see each other, we’re so blessed,
yet, I wish we’d stayed side by side.
All year around we must reside
apart and lonely, somewhat stressed.
Your in my heart this Christmastide
I must wait, patience can guide
me, excitement will be suppressed
yet, I wish we’d stayed side by side.
At last, we meet from far and wide
we hug with such a zing and zest,
you’re in my heart this Christmastide,
how I wish we’d stayed side by side.
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Hi Biggus, You are certainly
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Biggus,
You are certainly in top form today, a great IP in
my opinion.
Jenny.
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I've only ever attempted one
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
I've only ever attempted one villanelle, Val - but you have certainly put me to shame with this corker! Seriously well done ;)
Magic xxx
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I am probably more apt at
Permalink Submitted by luigi_pagano on
I am probably more apt at villainy than villanelles, dear Val, and I know how awkward they can be. I must congratulate you on this which is superb.
Luigi xxx
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