A Triolet Of Woe ( For The I. P.)

Cherry

By Bradene

Sat, 27 Nov 2010
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7 comments
 

I am full of words unspoken
My head will burst if I don’t speak
No words will fall upon the page.
I am full of words unspoken
My mind is addled due to age
spirits shortly will be broken
I am full of words unspoken
My head will burst if I don’t speak.

Certificate U
Poem
Life's Ups And Downs
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
A clever one, indeed, Val!! I know just how you feel;-) Tina x

 

Submitted by Bradene on
I like these little triolets I find they can be amusing and fun to do. Thanks for reading Tina. Valx

Submitted by Bradene on
Thankyou SC. Val

Submitted by tcook on
I like this too but the 'soon' in the third to last line seems to grate. Try reading it out loud and I think you'll agree.

Submitted by Bradene on
Yes I see what you mean perhaps I'll try to replace it with something else. Thanks Tony. Val

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Bradene Liked this,well deserved cherry! How did you guess? I am like that. julie xx

Submitted by Bradene on
I think this is a mood shared by writers the world over, it's what makes us tick. Thanks for reading Julie. Valx