This world was once a fluid haze of light.

By Buschell

Wed, 16 Oct 2013
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Some say we’re made up of stars
and bits of Nazis and popes and lizards
and that these bits have memory we can feel or recall,
and y’know I reckon it just might be true,
I reckon a fair whack of me must once have been you,
the way we buzz when we’re together,
it's atomic, I just know it is. 

 

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Submitted by scratch on

There's a step change at the end, it gives it a bit of a dint; somehow I like this really a lot.  Your writing seems to be from a pen that can (or wants to) let rip and somehow for some reason it isn't.  Whether that's intentional or not only time will tell.  Damn good short poem.  Well done - again.

 

Submitted by Buschell on

Scratch...your comment is greatly appreciated...yes I am lazy! You've got me fella and now I will have to pull out my finger and have a decent tilt at this writing thing. As for you...it appears that you inspire many folk arond these parts which is incredibly admirable. Fair play to you...Buschell Reen-Frogg.

I have just been given the all clear to write again after a long battle with narcoepileprosy. I am best known for my tour de force, "Do the Russell-fad dances through the ages".