Crick
By cabruce
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‘Hush your mouth,’
Mama said, wielding
a wooden spoon,
‘the word is creek.’
But Mama creek is
the dying sound of
that which is already
dead. Creek is split
wood meeting air
and crying out
for the bark it once
knew. Creek is the
taste of a caught breath
of a skipped heart
beat in the death
of night. But Mama
crick is - ‘Creek!’
but Mama crick is -
Mama. Mama listen,
the sound of water
meeting stone: plip,
rush - ‘Hush!’ - crick.
I remember water
hitting the sides of
my paper mache boat,
the open earth parting,
roots climbing, reach
out over the waves’
and my head, tickling
tops of our noses, tree
tops wishing their kin
goodbye. Crick, I was one
inside the earth though
I was on my journey
out.Crick is that place
in the woods where
the sun can’t touch
the ground and nothing
burns and the leaves
fall and the branches
laugh and Mama don’t
you remember that?
Remember that
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Wonderful poem, so evocative.
Wonderful poem, so evocative.
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really enjoyed this
really enjoyed this -beautiful mix of mystery with memory with your personal associations creating some very vivid images
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