Bleed

By Caolan_le_Paddy

Wed, 16 Apr 2008
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3 comments
 

Bleed,
Bleed dry,
Bleed and die,
Bleed and suffer,
Bleed and cry,
Bleed now,
Curse

Curse,
Curse me,
Curse me now,
Curse me to Hell,
Curse your son,
Curse him,
Die.

Die,
Die now,
Die and leave,
Die and be done,
Die forever,
Fight.

Fight,
Fight it,
Fight the heat,
Fight til the end,
Fight while you bleed,
Fight while you Curse me,
Fight while you die by me,
Fight while I laugh now,
Fight while I joke,
Fight til death,
Fight now,
Bleed.

Certificate U
Poem
Dark Work
Horror

Comments

Submitted by Caolan_le_Paddy on
Author Note* I did notice in the last verse I have 2 lines with 4 syllables but oh well.

Submitted by Sooz006 on
Like this one even more than the last. If I'd written it I'd replace the fight verse with the die one. Die is final and I think it would read better at the end.

 

Submitted by Caolan_le_Paddy on
Thanks I'll keep that in mind for the next.