Ode to a Snowflake....
By cassiopeia
Sun, 21 Mar 2010
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Oh little flake of purest white
How soft you glide from heavens height
To rest upon the frosty land
And touch the world with icy hands
Oh with your brethren cold and crisp
The barest sight, the slightest wisp
Cascading through the wintry sky
‘Til at my feet you gently lie
Oh tiny snowflake, natures lace
How soft you fall upon my face
Leave diamond traces on my skin
Before you vanish with your kin.
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I love this it is so
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
I love this it is so beautifully sweet! I'm going to read this to my children they'll love it xx
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As gentle as the snowflake
As gentle as the snowflake you describe, and just as beautiful
kheldar :--)
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Just realised I'd made a
Permalink Submitted by RachelPatricia on
Just realised I'd made a typo - didn't realise it'd put my comment to the bottom though! Still getting used to things on here,
You're very welcome for your comments, Cassiopeia, and yes, my children did love it, my daughter said it is 'very very pretty' and it inspired her to start writing her own little poem so thank you very much for that :)
Rachel xx
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Hello again Cassiopeia! Your
Hello again Cassiopeia! Your rhyme works out beautifully save in the first verse. I want to suggest: "To rest upon frosty lands".
Cheers keep well! &&
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Hmmmm, Nolan. You raise an
Hmmmm, Nolan. You raise an interesting point, a lot of poetry seems to allow the rhyming of singulars with plurals, you seem not to be ageeable to this.
Kheldar
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