"ANGEL FACE"

Cherry

By Cavalcader

Wed, 17 Jun 2009
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33 comments
 

While waiting for a friend in book
shop for coffee I looked at this magazine and jotted it down.

As I look into your beautiful face
The colours of your shawl light up
this place

The big brown eyes staring at me
maybe your thoughts are wandering
out to sea
of a loved one coming home to you

the delicate make up and the pert nose
no one knows where you have come from
looking like a mystic rose

or maybe you made the shawl
the pinks and mauves that are
interwoven
but chosen them to match
the flowers in the garden.

Certificate U
Poem
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Comments

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new skinner_jennifer Hi! jenny, just seen lovely comments on my very very first poem. I was tickled pink! Wow! again another lovley compliment,coming from a good writer like you,love mysticical poems and stories. Just lost all the comment to you. Tired hit wrong keys, spell wrong,unyet I know mainly how to spell! Thanks so much for going back on my work! I am thrilled when I see that and you have taken the time to read. As I put just now,went wrong! I was waiting for friend's in Border's coffe shop,one in wheelchair now? And embarrassed sit on my own,all there,so picked up magazine lovely photo in, previous AbcTaler 'Scribble' mentioned carrid pen,so jotted bit down,got home and read it was 'Jessica Rose' so changed into the shawl she was wearing, and hence the title. It was my very very first cherry! I was so overjoyed, especially,as my Ray drew one on,mucking about, then it appeared. Well all being well off,to London weds: Plus read not done anywhere long time! Thankyou so much for reading this. Have a good day. julie xx Are you going?

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi julie, no sorry I won't beable to make it. My partner works nights and there is no way I would travel up on the train on my own at night, a bit to old and nerves on my own as well. But I hope it all goes well and really hope the reading goes well, I'm sure you'll be great. Take care. Jenny.

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new skinner_jennifer Sorry! you can't make it. Loved to met you! Plus could have read your good work. Maybe another one then? I know what like someone be on nights. Awful! and a baby so young then! Well I can only go London,if Ray take me. My area for me is re-stricted for years. If he changes his mind I've had it! He doesn't do ro read any my so called poems! Yes,night time around is getting dodgy! Go on your much younger than me! Have a good day. Not bad if waits for me,as 6ft tall, and me 5ft 5' titch! yep! now two divans,owing crushed once! And you take care! thanks julie x

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