FREEDOM

new Rhiannow Hello! that's quick,comment. thanks nice comment. Keep thinking your name very much like the pop star. So must spell it right. Your right. Well kites get tangled like life, or can be dangerous to high for planes. Now all shapes. Need all comments help on this. When daughter small my ,mum's man then tied belt to end wow! went high. Good luck your's in the comp; bless you. julie x

New ScoZen Thankyou so much. Well Pinda was a great poet,slipped it into the last stanza. But poem bit long. Muddled. Your good writer. Thanks kind comments. Have a good week-end. julie x

new Silver=Spun-Sand Well the cat has a week off but mine walks in with him now. I must admit put Pinda in went better. Than poet's so long ago. What do you think! He had tattoos but couldn't think how bring them in. Like must have hurt! Been week of mental happenings. Not so bad some as it seemed. So in my dressing gown just doing a bit now. Did I say daughter's taken on Gt Dane big and tall. Wouldn't stay, went make a cuppa. Only young, waited outside all went to bus stop. Paper now says Kangaroo knocked someone over in Australia she badly bruised. Not the one make sent there? Frightened under circumstances Gt Dane could do although soft and gentle. Yes,I do go on about 'Jazz' "Green eyes" That's my best poem.Comfort crafty,full of love knows what likes and wants. But sometimes even he will turn his back to-wards me ah! and hides his antics make me laugh! Sometimes dry out! wants the table, or see out window,hide behind curtains, straight in kitchen drop milk,runs gone,into bedroom, sorting out which bed he knows a jumper on the other one! Likes look around, got good winter coat,won't pick him up mine does or to put out night time! Funny mine his back dodgy laid down,cat there, but mine has a stomache big when in chair, cat went up and down,when laying on it, made me laugh and laugh! But soon jumped down, heard my voice. Good luck yours to in the competition. Paper states hugs xx good many things. I have to ask most don't think essential,I love them. julie xx

new hudsonmoon Hello! Rich,Thankyou lovely comment. Computer went wrong, track seemed stuck. So pleased see working ok! replies going up now. Well I am talking of the cat of course, never talked him,now amazing, owner let me mention, or do poem 'Green Eyes' Jazz. Bit of siamese in him,cry! like Allo Allo Allo! If find time read all about! it as they say? Also one London trip, Wheatsheaf we got back, ll.30pm. Great evening. Something dashed by, cat thought a fox at first. Called him in for a while not ours. Full moon? I went in,and hubby said come quick! fox going down road ugh! didn't see much big one. But 3pm in day last week, only small town,mine had a small fox nearly knock him over,two teenagers photoed. Coming from playing fields, bit frightening. Oh! Jazz sits, right in from windoow, clear all for him, if on computer sat his bottom, in front so can't use much, as have share with hubby, not mine. Hnece mistakes if in a hurrry. Yes, I had a break while, wrong messages, etc; worrying. Not knowing, and they don't answer emails. Ok now. Daughter's looking after Gt Dane bit big! softy but to big me to see much off! scared. Just got wopnderful Anthology book arrive, 'Let's start again'. And omg Im in. Now can read all great poems, names and Abctaler's in. Good colour front and back, paper book. 204 pages. Worth every 1p. Hope you pick up soon! See you write children's books. I have seen odd things animals about, read The Brush of a wild animal. Fox, cat Jazz, ferrets, plastic duck large on roof car, laughed. Duck on a lead. So you can use some? you mention sleep, get light music, no words,sit in chair,someone light touch,places fingers lightly, on forehead, from centre out,and shoulders massaged, relax all parts body, person doing it, uses words,breathe in and out, slowly letting go all,bring in images, fountains birds watergfalls. Massager tells them forget all,it can be a sea sound,birds whatever, have eyes shut. Wake feeling afresh and cup of tea. Had it all done! Spiritually, and have done it works. Far better than all pills. Or once told, vicar to open bible,read psalm, the lord will wath over me,if wake up early. Nothing will hinder me, or harm me etc; Said next time,did it work. Oh! all there, yes, looked all worried and pleased when I said yes, "I knew it would". I didn't think so either but did. closing for now, what's weather like. Used to go to Harrogate when young, take my brother's and sister to aunt's stay week, wnet by coach or train and coach. Lovely place. The gardens. Think may been York, The Viking museum. Few years back holiday and all met up then. Do get reading and writing. julie xx

new Editor t.cook (Tony) I know the computer gone wrong? just couldn't believe email was right Thankyou so much Tony, for the 3 cherries! On poem for 'Pinda' 'Freedom'. The mention was wonderful. But couldn't fathom this out at first! Many many thanks for the cherries! and the Team. All the AbcTaler's great boost,and comments So many by names. Thanks AbcTaler's. Email on my google all re-set fathom out? Just stunned and overjoyed. Wishing you all a merry christmas (-: Can't think with few problems here...moment made my, day, one says this another that all different in the end day,and phone messages. ugh! had re-read and re-read again and again. Maybe Tony, I should be called "Cacklecader" cavalcaderl julie. (:-

new Nolan Hello! Yes you are so right,thanks for your lovely comment. I have done thee, 'FREEDOM' poems on the late 'Pinda'Peace is what all can search for, comes from within and spritiual of course! Or as you mention turning of from hum! drum every day life! by doing soemthing different maybe. Just being quiet 'Silence Is Golden'. So you have a choice and tell me which you think is best? Keep your poems coming too! The wind has died down so much damage. Good be home in the warm. Mine was absolutely silly,knew had appointment for a flu jab, and bad shoulder, from the bus jerk? And snooker later? Oh! Dr.Flu jab @ 3.15pm onto the snooker on way after. And a waiting physio shoulder1 No good telling him so be it? And peaceful week-end to you. Mine set his computer right on the table his, and talks in between, or puts a meal down,just as trying something on his computer. Put's computer mouse pad higher! but he can work and eat not fair? julie x

New Scratch Wow! gee! brightened me up,your great comment. Especially "Green Eyes" Jazz" neighbour's cat? Hubby Ray now let's him in,sits on his lap,if Ray says no! jumping up! he knows. As claws bit long,but he looks at Ray,like an owl turning his head,the moment Rays stops massaging his his head and scratching his body! as if saying! saying please carry on"? I have the lighter touch. Given to me a gift holy one. In all adversity. If we go out separately "Jazz" be there,run half way down the road. We say stop! He still comes back us all the time, truly wonderful cat,bit siamese in. Daughyter's husband just lost one of two rescue cat's from a kittens they had,they have three. Well certainly good writer, for not been on site long! I had too blink! three times make sure,got three cherries? after trying three for late "Pinda" Freedom poem comps: checked with Editor t.cook (tony) He was delighted? but recommendation too!. Cherries! sometimes for inspiration and trying harder too. I was gobsmakced and overwhelmed. Then added to "Green Eyes" poem since 2009 think? In to-day and did snuggle! on new cover blanket I got him,only £3 bit fluffy! saw his owner as "Jazz" come in day time,and nap 3 hours,I say beautiful boy! But if he is nodding off and I touch him,might have a claw out. So he come in say after 2 3 hours nap, if I check open his eyes,whisper love you,he puts his head round into his chest, I giggle. Loves to wander,in kitchen. Smell vase if any flowers in,watch me running watering can, sit on wall. Lays right acroos computer. Up on the table. Go to doors if wants go out,yesterday layed outside after he went no sun,curl4ed into ball rolling over I was laughing all the time. First cat in life! I have ever spoken too. He used cry! allo! allo! allo! such a loveable boy! tell owner is it ok. as in a few hours with us,he knows about poem. Which I have read out at "The Wheatsheaf" take a deep breath first! And also in AbcTales 23 buy book of many in, so exciting reading other's writing poems and stories. Cat is getting on so I enjoy your well written work. I'm just reading mag: re-writers block,how to scribble page of rubbish,then paragraph it. Know what want to say,put into story or poem not easy! Keep up your writing. I am all mended now,tripp steps here,both hands full,lead from bedroom down,I was going up backless slippers,wham! bang down went,cut mouth or gums, took two days,feel ok. Ray seeing friend in a home f and in wheelchair,had to phone,time got back took taxi stopped bleeding and I prayed. Thopught two teeth would go,hit pint heavy clay mug! Off to a lunctime jazz concert like,hour to-morrow,no Ray come,then Thrusday both goping concert "Katy Setterfield Worthing Pavilion,late "Dust Springfield" songs my time, love them all. Thankyou so much. take care. Not good at punctuation and more or less most on my life! or whatever or try (IP) But Editor t.cook (Tony's) help and reading other writer's work helps me so much! Still nippy out I came back, lfet Ray go on his own shops. Snooker Captain! So if one talks to there,cat, beautifulwhere have you been? I have missed you,you are lovely, he will respond. And too yes, can and no you can't, cried out last night tea time,go,or bump door come in. cavalcaderl julie xx

new SundaysChild Wow! Thanks for saying so,maybe bit jumbled. But a cherry! correction got three cherries! And a recommendation omg! think spelt right! From the Editor t.cook (Tony) had to rub my eyes twice. Ask if it was right. But late "Pinda" on here was a great poet! Hope your well, great to meet you! Take good deep breaths just before you read helps! You were a good reader and the story so interesting. take care. I just love your title. "SundaysChild". You write so well. Thanks too. julie x

new Richard L.Prov.. Hello! Richard,just checked Lovely comment from you,not me,word is Kite. Sorry! Yes,Editor t.cook (Tony) after got Three cherries! For the Three on late 'Pinda' gt writer we asked to try one for him. Going back! My life from a child up! through bit like, 'Princess' Diana but we learn,take all things thrown at us! Very hard! Have two darlings,got move,from house into bungalow,as only couple years? Health of them,love daughter and son-in-law so much. Happens to families. So understand try comfort as go along maybe! Ask why! And us as children big family,those times just had to accept. Ray is 10 years,younger never mattered,but many tears etc;flown under the bridge,I will never truly,understand changed personality have to deal with. The cat 'Jazz' Gives so much love,and we give him good therapy all,as poems say know! If only could turn clock back! Get lonely,when off snooker and bowls. Course. If only knew what know now? I have given and done stood by him in everything! Not same for me. Thrilled get,reply on this one, Editor t.cook (Tony) gave me good report too! love see someone answers an old one of mine! Like most themselves like! Ruby 40 years,present daughter son-in-law of many, shoot out voucher,two,no Ray go,dress in kind of vintage costumes,she is coming,instead nice! Date limit extended,owing my ear! we both love rock n'roll and maybe crinoline dress,they sent one,year extra surprise,seems highest readings mine,My Extra Birthday Surprise think! Blow! I wanted cat 'Jazz' be top! Beat all mine who! knows. Why! don't you email,Editor t.cook (Tony) help get your poems done etc;published knows so many people. Mine started only,homeless 1st day centre,all ages, never done,write name,them about it,onto doing 20 words,say camera umbrella things etc;design,pictures look into? say a rose,like me? Angel no! Explain further. Staff would read send in Big Issue aged,from 16 80 years,gt therapy me,apart from men? But Prayed get in one day,see some know years,could sing and dance poems so could see them,had be careful,happened. All put into books and drawings some,shown on Cinema private room,plastic oscars,Omg1 given out,to all,fab;my stars x bill 'Chris Ellison'and x 'Joe Mangle,honour huge! screen say poem,cat face mask 'Green Eyes' 'Jazz' best reader prizes,letter,and watched all. My word. An achievement. Closed for re-furbishing shame! They put all into books,have everyone,cd could buy. Then read AbcTales in paper comp; hence just,tried copy mine,not poet,or story teller. Done! many other things now! Not gloating just stating! when all fails things in life! Happenings. So here I am. Editor t.cook (Tony) helped so much,didn't do punctuation! or typed our work done for us. Some so young started very good on here too! I Feel deflated. Quite few writer's buy their books too on here! I have,also pay comps;can buy all asked, or put in,photo of all,agree! and bit about oneself beginning,all typed by Editors. But mainly reading other's is great help. Even if don't comment quite correctly. Pray for our Editor t.cook (tony) Father d. Also prayers for Prince Harry! all Royal family, and us,as I pray for all of you. Which used to do,years eventually at church! No time to go now! Never get in touch! changed all over now! Not like ever was before.priests all wonderful help then. I like your work style,of life1 how put into stories. Good luck many thanks xx julie