MY SUNSHINE

By Cavalcader

Tue, 09 Jun 2009
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6 comments
 

Here comes my sunshine
on her wedding day
Fthr Alan would say come in
and pray and bless
them in a special way

When the bride comes out smiling
and the groom stands up straight
a person is twirling an umbrella
at the gate.

The photographers followed them everywhere
A big brass band with a blare
No one seemed to have a care

Some in peculiar dress there was one
of a cat with a mouse on his head
one with car going along
as a bed
another a clown
with a carrot for a nose.

Onto the beach the sand was twirling around
the couple holding hands ,
true love was found.

I have permission to use
professional names.
comments please!
this be nice to
put to a song
someone could.

Certificate U
Poem
Love

Comments

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New everyone is somebodies !Sunshine" on their Wedding Day. Put to-gether list words at our writing group and into sentences or poem I was amazed how I did but it;s funny. I see mcscraig Song Writer well done my wish to see this put to music "My Sunshine" an Fthr Alan priest + name in okd. as I have just put on your comments kindly to me I missed.till now? jule cavalder x.

Submitted by Nolan on
Superstition has it that it is very good luck when it rains on your wedding day && “Onto the beach the sand was twirling around the couple holding hands , true love was found.” Such wonderful words of happiness!
 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Nolan thankyou lovely commnent.Yes,sounds nice. It was from day centre collection of words. Glad you liked it,your's are good.Love Angels and love and beauty. julie

Submitted by Nolan on
What is this “day centre” Julie?
 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Nolan Hello! so many versions really of people and lives,medically everything. But this one another one, I went had homeless come, and could join groups like we did. From age 17 to 90.Closed re-doing up may re-open much later.Cookery be taught Homeless learn not sure.Pottery,photography Drama.song and dance act.Learn to write,or story life,or try to put into poem lines. Picture cards to study,Look into and write. Use the mind,cups tea and biscuits,lunches all much cheaper than eat out.Xmas great dinners all put on crackers and gifts,like my church I went. Hats socks scarves,onre buy and all for them,or fet'es held.We could all give a hand.Food given away day centres,buy sandwiches some have machines now pop money in.Muis group if they want to go.Some just like to chat.smoking not allowed now,glad in a way room was full of smoke at one time.Staff there didfferent problems we all and some had so many deal with.All was filmed as I said 4 years and put on screen private cinema room,and certificates handed out all our work,and oscars plastic,all treated the same,amazing.given out by host celebs;at one time. Two different ones.Massive screen.We even did a bit of Rap have I spelt it right."Joe Mangle" and "Chris Ellison".Great fun practising all our bits.and cds. That's enough from me,it closed now.But to go classes any of the these things,have to pay quite a bit.So very lucky.Guitarists anything we could do,brought in for others or ask them to use their talents.God said share your talents.Never to old or to young try,then Joined AbcTales.com never done. julie xx

Submitted by Nolan on
Interesting! Sounds like fun. Be good! Nolan