"The Summer Bus"

By Cavalcader

Thu, 10 Sep 2009
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5 comments
 

The summer bus with an open deck top!
will take you along
You'll see sights and trees
youv'e never seen before
It may not even stop'

Scarves are blowing in the wind
A mystery tour about to begin!
maybe Pearly "King and Queen"
sitting in the front seat giving a wave.

As I look down
I can see fair ground tops
and candy floss,
some people's knees
a shop selling cheese'

The cliffs are coming into view
hangliders are floating down,
There's a huge seagull
who has his eye on someone's chips
want's to bombard and take it out
of a person's hand

The Sea is ebbing and flowing
to the shore!
Coloured balloons are out and
flags a celebration of years
gone by.

Steps leading up to a caf'e plateau
Icecreams all flavours and sizes
children with love and smiley faces.

The clowns in all diguises
with big white painted mouths
their eyes are made up like big
moon stones.

Disney faces are looking out the
window.the children are pointing too!
Minnie Mouse,Goofy,Donald-Duck,Pluto,
the Smurf,and crocodile
and of course "Scooby-Doo"
"I wanna be like you"

Certificate U
Poem
Other Fiction

Comments

Submitted by hilary west on
A very evocative poem Cavalcader. It is colourful and very visual. Well done !!!.

 

Submitted by Beeme on
I really enjoyed this, great images Julie :) Well done! Love this verse; 'The clowns in all diguises with big white painted mouths their eyes are made up like big moon stones.' Beeme xx

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
New hilary west wow! Thankyou so much great comment. Cor! well I was sitting in "Spud-U-like" and about 20ft away I could see this big 3d big bus cardboard I suppose, so try to scribble poem, alone got up went over people sitting must thought! barmy as it was high up then I saw it had Disney characters hence finish of poem. I did put 100th birthday and the lady was in garden doing the Rumba!but he said no. New hilary west Oh! some comments come up now so leave it.double. Wow!Thankyou so much lost comment wrong button. so try again.Had to look up word evocative!! I was sitting in "Spud-U-Like" eating. about 20ft away could see this so sat doodling poem, got up went over to finish people sitting must thought I was barmy? cos: it was high up.but oh! dear there was the Disney characters had blend in, and I did put someone 100 in the garden doing "The Rumba" hubby happened to be in! after argument. No he says. But originally planned go to "Worthing"having tough time! .But people do look as real decker goes by? Cor! so pleased you got something out of it. comments on change! be lovely anyone. Thankyou xx julie x cavalcader (:-

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Beeme Wow! thankyou great comment just done reply lost it, read Hilarys too same, cor I'm really at " Spud-U-Like" eating alone . Oh! Beeeme saw a real bus recently "Pearly"King and Queen" on look up give little wave! julie x (:-

Submitted by Miss_D_Meaner on
I enjoyed this julie x.