"The Waning Moon"

By Cavalcader

Fri, 17 Jul 2009
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11 comments
 

The waning moon follows us around
from clouds of dust the
stars sparkling
cascading
and twirling down

with angel's spanned wings
watching over us
OH!
heart that beats so fast
and cries!
out for peace on earth.

comments please or alter verses

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Submitted by Beeme on
I found this fascinating and beautiful great work Cavalcaderl x

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Submitted by Jupiter on
Hi Julie. I think Beeme is right - fascinating - but I think that is because I don't understand ;-). I just wanted to support you - I'm rubbish at these unobvious pieces - but it sounds nice ;-)

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Submitted by Cavalcader on
new elements thankyou comments.Waning Moon can be expression to.No I don't know Poets you mentioned tell me? nice but I don't read poetry books much I have one called Dr's Surgery given to me. and somebodies? Diaries 2nd hand. Maybe I should try get one someone once close to me did Shelley! and Keats! can't do all that. its writing group and homeless we make up list of words. pictures.filmed recently talent brought out.. wonderful work. after 21???? to 90 plus no one wants us especially over 5o-8o ages and younger groups belong. or places think to old. But ABCtales in Argus here so just had a go comp; Love all comments coming in and one cherry. so I shoved them all on. But readings (3) at 1st wow sky high.under all adversities.In The bIG iSSUE. pay and co. had to pay etc;one in book @ £15 time to publish story cost £100 plus. Pensioner's cannot afford that writing group free. Abc t.Cook I Read in The "Argus" here great only £5 comp.Read? about and I put in my 1st comp; My late Birthday Surprise. True. "Green Eyes" and some others in "Argus "free. we did sheltered homes singing dancing some musical,writing groups mixed homeless. are yu poet.so many helped me here! Jennifer, Jupiter.Silver-Spun-Sand xx Beeme Richard Prov Lennie.Sarah Wilson,Whiskey many more I haven't put on time as of fete. gobsmacked! in 4 books one pays, not any more?" do few "Argus" free. and to many Angel titles so decided call it such. But hubby been to fete and come back surprise 2 "Angel" pictures great Wings! and children. julie x cavalcader. Should I cut down on length of mine.answer please.

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new elements just remembered hymn call "Jesus shall reign o er'e the sun".ends The Moon shall wax and wane no more! used to sing at church.anyone know it send please! julie x

Submitted by Cavalcader on
New Jupiter I think the word hate is love they say but a better word be irresponsbile.Many people stressed out now papers say in all works and circumstances that's why any kind creative works can try! j x

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Submitted by lenchenelf on
Pretty, dreamy and conjures up a lot of images that you could work with. atb Lenax

 

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new lenchenelf thankyou well have to get my brain working, been fowl day it was how I felt jumbled to-gether.I think I was waining inside over incident not asked or invited.secretcy. mobile family 80th no intention invite! julie cavalvader. -:)

Submitted by Cavalcader on
new Beeme thankyou forgot to say been hectic time? and so I scribbled few lines. I was "Waining" bad inside incident.glad you liked it.Going to wedding soon nice day out. julie x I always wain about something according to mine! pleasing him,how years changed us. julie cavalcader x (:- I'd mostly help in church when I was left years on my own here while he visited his Mum. Xmas times. j x