she takes the biscuit

By c.d.lee

Fri, 25 Mar 2011
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take two then call me in the morning, she stands to leave, leans in to kiss then she slaps me without warning, god i love her should i risk it, but she really takes the biscuit god i love her so you know i do you know i do

hand in hand in the park walking she good at telling, just not talking she finds fault with everything i think, then she smiles, crinkled nose and cheeks so pink, god i love her, should i risk it, but yeah she really takes the biscuit, cos i love her so, you know i do

my birthday is coming yet its feels so hard, maybe this year from her ill open up a card, i always want her by my side, is she scared, that , her feeling she must hide, god i love her, should i risk it, but, damn she really takes the biscuit

scared that im the one to leave and run, she's the first to hold the smoking gun, shoots me true, cuts me in my prime, i cant blame her, guess its just our time,god i love her should i risk it,but she really takes the biscuit,i love her so ,i love her so,i loved her true

take two then call me in the morning, she stands to leave leans in to kiss, then slaps me without warning,god i love her, should i risk but she really takes the biscuit,god i love her so, you know i do, you know i do, you know i do, you know i do

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Submitted by LTBurbery on
I like the way you repeat the first stanza at the end again, it shows the cycle repeating itself. I like the content too, I read your poem 'such are the choices' years ago and I liked it because it was blunt but still clever and profound. Good to see you haven't given up.