Cenotaph
By celticman
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My death wilted in disorder
A little note; a little chatter
Could not find the chit
Chapter in the crypt
Right road but so wrong
Country cemeteries paced in song
Inscriptions on skulls of what used to be
What we left of you and me
Dictionary dates I can’t find
Versification going blind
Misspelling of what used to be
Foreign names sound the key
Earth, grass, a good strong tree
Pre-Cambrian that’s a hoot
Mammogram of a mound an offshoot
People loosend often laugh
Old man’s beard a new birdbath
Swamp spilling between us all
Deer and wolves that once called
Bluffs and beaded sand
Gentle lift of the land
An eye, a foot, a hand a nook
That was all it took
You were here; I was there
Not made for wear
Pale grey crumbling rock
Kame Moraines were we sat
Combs of ice through a heart
Split domains until the crop came
Crowd of light
Little by little we start again
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I love the way the title
I love the way the title suggests 'predictable' and your poem is the complete opposite. Deep, different, lovely imagery and a hopeful ending. Great stuff! Elsie
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Unusual with some intriguing
Unusual with some intriguing imagery. One to read over.
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I have read and re-read this
I have read and re-read this a couple of times and found it interesting and enjoyable to think about. Will read again.
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