Homily

By celticman

Fri, 17 Jan 2014
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We would build a lifetime with our love

We made a pit of our lust

A shaker out of life and must

Exquisite house, exquisite home and conspiracy

Genius of architectural plumbing other designs

How to books and modern crime

How blessed and heaven mates

Which look of us casts the most weight?

In paradise money carries no freight

It will not stop us being true

Who my love are you?

The mind maps we once planned

Crops of ideas in each other’s hands

Suck in your belly the harvest of man

 

 

Certificate PG
Poem
Philosophy

Comments

Submitted by VeraClark on

I like lot about this, the building theme shifts just when I think I've pinned it down. Reminds me of a plan I once drew of the house I'd buy. The house I live in looks nothing like that drawing. But, still.

 

Submitted by celticman on

thanks Vera, it was just a quickie.

 

Submitted by jeand on

Hi Jack

You've not got a school photos for me to read, so I found this. I'm not much good at writing or judging poetry, so I can't really make any very sensible comments. I like the idea of it, but got lost in trying to decide what it meant.

 

Jean

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