The Lie


By chant
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You claimed I’d come back in the fishing boat
alone, greased with the old man’s blood
him slit open, tossed overboard, gnawed
by seals. No, I said. He was out there.
Your tale travelled. Now the town
kept its distance. Kids pitched stones.
You honed your grudge, blew it up
with a rumour, stirred the waters
of chaos. I took the form you made.
A bad spell. In the bath I scrubbed
and scrubbed. Nights I tramped the beach
shouting for the old man. He was out there.
Steadily waves broke on the bare shore.
My life was a foreign body, a lie.
Soon I’d find words to expose it.
@ianjmclachlan
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I can't believe this wasn't
I can't believe this wasn't pounced on with comments. Rumours build and spread hate with superstitious stories. Should have killed 'the old man' sounds like he was a shark! Anguish that he's still out there. Threat? Loved the idea of life being a foreign body, as separate from being, a lie to be uncovered when words were found - as in poetry, perhaps. Dark with great images. Whatever the meaning, it's compelling.
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So few comments for such a
So few comments for such a compelling, unsettling poem. Superb!
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