Knots
By cjm
Sun, 05 Jun 2011
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6 comments
I may unravel
when the tide comes in
As the sun sinks
below the horizon
I may unravel at dusk
or dawn
When the fisherman rise
to cast their nets
Or when they return
nets laden
with fish
and seaweeds
with shells
and stray clothes
Unravel I will
Only God knows when.
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Hello cjm. I liked this, but
Hello cjm.
I liked this, but then I'm a sucker for watery yarns.
ps warning, once wet, knots will never unravel.
ScoZen
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I really like the succinct
I really like the succinct wording of this piece.
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