Terra Incognita
By D G Moody
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Then he, boasting of his own country:
so vast – while mine was so small –
he likened it to a postage stamp.
‘Enough’ – I thought, so I said:
“get me two sheets of paper,
one for you and one for me.”
Taking mine, and folding it
over and over – folding it
until it became smaller
then smaller - and
even smaller.
He looked very perplexed – so I said:
“Do you see what we now have –
two sheets; yours still blank,
while mine is condensed
with hidden significance;
folded in such a way,
it’s not easy to see
what is inside
its essence.
About your land I grant, you may certainly boast,
though, you are still living –mainly on the coast.
In the interior – where your sheet is blank,
there’s the place you seldom visit or see;
still in the minds of the people of time,
who ages ago folded that space from
distance – into their dreamtime.
So be careful how you boast;
unless you’re prepared
to fold your coast,
into the empty
interior
And yet,
I can state,
that this land –
the one to hand,
though being small,
may be larger overall;
with more packed inside:
nature, culture, and history,
not to mention its topography,
that can be realised from outside;
so, if I may, I’ll defend its smaller size.”
© D.G. Moody. 2024
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Haven't seen you around
Haven't seen you around awhile! I hope you are both OK.
Quite an interesting idea. Not that I feel any land is perfect! But there are big lands that are vast geographically, but parts sparsely populated, And as for what the standards of justice are in each, is another question.
My father always felt that in Wales we had everything in minature and easily reachable — waterfalls, mountains, beaches, boglands (!), rivers etc. The land is small enough to get to know its every corner (well, within reason!). In Scotland he'd say they may be bigger, but they are so far to travel from one to another and to really get to know the whole land! Rhiannon
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Home is where the heart is,
Home is where the heart is, Dougie. Nice reading your writings again.
Best, Luigi
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Dylan Thomas also wrote some poems in very much this kind of form, "Vision and Prayer" is a masterpiece. He wrote a lot of his father, of sex, and death and religion. Bob Dylan took his name. Dylan Thomas died young, shortly before his 40th birthday, which is the same date as mine.
All the best & Nolan
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