Above Such Things
By D Marie
Mon, 13 Dec 2021
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I lay on the grass
To look at the sky
And the sky looks back
While passing me by
And for every cloud
That drifts from sight
Another comes
To take its place
Another comes
To carry away
The cares that weigh me down.
Past and future concerns.
Clouds are above such things.
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I really enjoyed this - loved
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I really enjoyed this - loved the last line! Thank you D
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It's always great to read a
Permalink Submitted by donignacio on
It's always great to read a poem with optimism. This one made me feel good, so thank you for that.
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Expressive and descriptive way of seeing troubles come and go like clouds. Your poem says so much.
Jenny.
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Clouds always do the right
Clouds always do the right thing ... well nearly always.
And they have no cares.
I enjoyed readying your poem very much.
Turlough
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