Rain Clouds

By D Marie

Thu, 15 Apr 2021
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Rain clouds gather on the horizon,
giving fair warning
to those who notice,
before it pours down - pours down.

Certificate U
Poem
Philosophy
Nature

Comments

Submitted by Nolan on

Pretty! Clever and it's a lot like a Haiku. I like these little poems of yours. And it's better to have some freedom instead of strict form and fixed rules. Why should you?

Keep well Donna & Nolan

 

Submitted by D Marie on

I appreciate your encouraging advice.

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

You say so much in so few words and it works.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by marandina on

I like the little refrain at the end.