Loneliness
By Daniel Saint-John
Tue, 15 Nov 2011
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The eye is wide open,
spots a fat sun smiling.
Sweet breeze
through the crack in the window,
infuses wellness to the morning air.
She is gone by now,
trail of petals left as a reminder.
The cat is confused with the pink slippers
[on the carpet.
Better to remain in bed.
Her bulk, a new pillow,
a replacement,
to alleviate our loneliness.
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I rather like this - the
I rather like this - the lonely feeling comes across well.
`The cat is confused with the pink slippers
on the carpet.' Nice line.
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I think I might know that
Permalink Submitted by rask_balavoine on
I think I might know that cat!
Rask
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