The Hunter
By darkenwolf
Fri, 20 Aug 2010
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Time slows; the seconds like molasses,
He draws near once more,
As he did once before,
When he took her from me.
I feel his presence though I see him not,
The chill around the heart,
The catch of breath,
Close; but not enough to claim me yet.
I await his touch, without fear,
But he looks o’er my shoulder no more,
The heart warms, breath eases,
The clock ticks in time again.
But I seek him out and follow his trail,
His scent familiar to me now,
Endlessly searching for the battle I cannot win;
The hunter become the hunted.
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new darkenwolf Like this
Permalink Submitted by Cavalcader on
new darkenwolf
Like this poem, and the story
attached with it the stanza I like;
I await his touch, without fear,
But he looks o'er my shoulder no more,
The heart warms, breath eases,
The clock ticks in time again.
julie xx
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Hi Darkenwolf, I almost feel
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi Darkenwolf,
I almost feel the beginnings of a story here.
When you say, the hunter becoming the hunted.
Maybe a short story.
It sounds like a dream I had once, of being chased
by a dark figure, but then no longer being afraid.
When I turned to face him, he disappeared, I woke.
Really enjoyed reading this poem.
Jenny.
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Hi darkenwolf, I read it
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi darkenwolf,
I read it again, and I see what you mean.
Me thinks it's a very dark poem.
Jenny.
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You pull off sinister yet
Permalink Submitted by MistakenMagic on
You pull off sinister yet beautiful, wonderfully in this poem, darkenwolf - well done! ;)
Magic xxx
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hard wun to hunt down mind,
hard wun to hunt down mind, I am no longer running yet will still put up a hell a fight ;) good poem K
"I will make sense with a few reads \^^/ "
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