Someone l used to know ..

By denni1

Mon, 10 Sep 2012
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4 comments
 

Don't you DARE ..

Pick up the phone.
Text or call.
Send a card.
Try to pass by, nonchalantly.
Ask for your gifts back.
Look up his family.
Give your gifts back.
Go online date sites.
Go on a date.
Look a sight.

Fingers crossed, it'll be awrite ..

Certificate U
Poem
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by jolono on
Nice one Den.

 

Submitted by denni1 on
Xx

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
hi denni - I really like this poem. You've categorised it as a U, which is fine, only the teaser line you've put in - "be still my fuckin' heart" .... although completely appropriate for the piece, has to be something U rated, since it appears on the general ABC page which has to be suitable for everyone. This means you either have to change the fuck for another word, or stick in a few asterisks. I know it's a pain but it's a legal requirement - sorry!

 

Submitted by denni1 on
Thank you .. l forgot about the teaser. Inappropriate use of the word 'f', anyway .. mer see bow coo xx