The Warning ..

By denni1

Thu, 07 Feb 2013
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13 comments
 

I won't be going to your little 'do'.
You don't like me, and l pity you.

It all started out to be good fun,
then you flirted with my husband
guess l got the signals wrong.

Why try it on in front of a wife
who truly loves her husband and family life?
I can't understand it, if that was me,
I'd rather stay single indefinitely.

So lady, stay away from him and l
or that pretty face of yours will be sporting a black eye

Certificate 18
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Comments

Submitted by jolono on
Ooo Errr Den, bit touchy there. She was only saying hello!

 

Submitted by denni1 on
Do you think so? Insecurity is soooo unattractive .. xx

Submitted by MS on
take it as a compliment Denni, at least he's turning heads.

 

Submitted by denni1 on
Oh, it's not my situ .. just an observation xx

Submitted by MS on
in that case kick her in the shin aswell.

 

Submitted by denni1 on
She ain't got 'nuff shins left xx !! Dx

Submitted by moonphish on
shin ? heck, kick her in the CHIN ! :) - alvin

Submitted by denni1 on
Oh, l reckon' all is well now xx no chins were harmed, thankfully Dx

Submitted by karl_wiggins on
Flying head-butt Denni. That oughta do it.

 

Submitted by denni1 on
Now, would your Sue do that for you, if you were getting chatted up, keeebab in hand? Dx

Submitted by TVR on
I loved the simplicity of this poem, Denise, and of the idea behind it, and you come out with some great rhymes too. Trev

TVR

Submitted by denni1 on
There was a man called Trevor Who liked to have a wee blether But he went too far Chattin' up Denise Marr So she's gonna see he's tarred and feathered ..

Submitted by TVR on
Ooh, I'll look forward to that, Denise. Great limerick, by the way. Trev

TVR