A Brief History!

By Denzella

Thu, 22 Mar 2018
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A Brief History! IP

 

Professor Stephen Hawking,

Who refused to stop working

Gave us the Big bang Theory.

Although it made him weary.

 

To those in desperation,

He was an inspiration.

He explained the Universe,

Though his illness was a curse.

 

With an incredible mind,

He refused to be defined,

By Motor Neurone Disease,

Though losing strength by degrees.

 

His work done he slipped away,

Not for him another day.

Always going one more mile,

Made his life so worthwhile.

 

He knew he had done his best,

Now it’s time for him to rest.

Go gently into the night,

You have shown us to the light.

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Comments

Submitted by airyfairy on

I was glad to see he's going to be buried in Westminster Abbey, alongside Newton, Darwin etc.  Quite right too.  

Submitted by Denzella on

Hello Airy,

I couldn't agree more.  A true hero.

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

I thought you said you didn't do poetry? This is lovely epitaph

With an incredible mind,

He refused to be defined,

By Motor Neurone Disease,

Though losing strength by degrees.

 

Submitted by Denzella on

Hello Di,

Sorry I haven't replied before but thank you for calling this piece poetry.   I know I am no poet.  I can't get to grips with metre.  I never know what metre a poem is written in.  As for metaphors...they are quite beyond me.  Though I do sometimes get to grips with similes.

Moya x

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

well, you are better than me, I have never even understood what the difference is. I got E for English A level :0)

 

Submitted by Denzella on

Hello Di,

Ah! But you have a  poetic soul!

Moya 

 

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou :0) But YOU  can do satire and I WISH WISH WISH  I could do that

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Thankyou :0) But YOU  can do satire and I WISH WISH WISH  I could do that!