An Ode on Resurgence

By Dodgystrawberry

Thu, 07 Oct 2010

6 comments

I love him.
More than words can say.
Realise that.
There always comes a day.

If I were to lose him?
I know I would survive.

My teacher.
Builds me; lends me tools.
Hold on tight.
A safety net without rules.

I've been through loss before.
That makes me love him more.

Permalink Submitted by Dodgystrawberry on Thu, 2010-10-07 16:26

I'm really not sure about the title I've used for this. I think it gets across the point, & multi-direction, of the poem but, I don't like it!

Lesser Mortals Have Superiority.

Permalink Submitted by fatboy74 on Thu, 2010-10-07 21:52

I like this poem, it's simply told and very effective. Don't really understand the title though so not much help there! :-)

Permalink Submitted by Dodgystrawberry on Sat, 2010-10-09 22:35

Thank you for your comments, glad you like it! Maybe I should come up with a more simple, and effective, title too! ;-)

Lesser Mortals Have Superiority.

Permalink Submitted by Highhat on Sat, 2010-10-09 22:45

might mean that the feeling comes again and again. I don't know though I liked it ;)pia

Permalink Submitted by Dodgystrawberry on Sat, 2010-10-09 22:52

Well it does, so that's definitely part of it! Thanks ;-)

Lesser Mortals Have Superiority.

Permalink Submitted by kuno-chan on Fri, 2010-10-15 14:45

i like it. ----Kuno-Chan----

----Kuno-Chan----