Home Read Write Forums Blogs Sol By D MarieWed, 09 Jan 2019 509 reads 2 comments Rolled plasma Bubbling sphere Nuclear temper Spraying flares Cosmos fuelled Burning gift Golden giver Dark beginnings Nine circling Original light Certificate UPoemChildren's Facebook Twitter Log in to post comments Comments the sun Permalink Submitted by Nolan on Wed, 2019-01-09 17:45 Not really so abstract as not understandable! And children wouldn't even know some of the words here. Even for me it's not easy I think you are describing the sun (Sol). It must be. It's actually very clever & Log in to post comments Thanks for honesty Permalink Submitted by D Marie on Wed, 2019-01-09 18:23 I will keep this as it is but do another more understandable one for the kids. And yes you guessed right Nolan. Log in to post comments
Sol By D MarieWed, 09 Jan 2019 509 reads 2 comments Rolled plasma Bubbling sphere Nuclear temper Spraying flares Cosmos fuelled Burning gift Golden giver Dark beginnings Nine circling Original light Certificate UPoemChildren's Facebook Twitter Log in to post comments Comments the sun Permalink Submitted by Nolan on Wed, 2019-01-09 17:45 Not really so abstract as not understandable! And children wouldn't even know some of the words here. Even for me it's not easy I think you are describing the sun (Sol). It must be. It's actually very clever & Log in to post comments Thanks for honesty Permalink Submitted by D Marie on Wed, 2019-01-09 18:23 I will keep this as it is but do another more understandable one for the kids. And yes you guessed right Nolan. Log in to post comments
