ragweed love

By Everything here is the best thing ever

Tue, 02 Dec 2014
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My love for you is like ragweed in the summertime

In that, I'm always breathing you in and can feel your reminiscence in my mouth

Sometimes, your love carries in the wind and I can feel you tickling my nose

I open my mouth for you, hoping you jump on in and nesstle on my tounge

When I sneeze outdoors I think of you

When I sneeze indoors I think of you

When my eyes tearup I'm thinking of all the beautiful things we've done together

Sometimes my throat thickens and I think it's because of the ragweed, but it's really because of all the loving words I want to say to you

 

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Submitted by Stephen Thom on

Ah I enjoyed this. I liked the last line a lot. Sometimes my throat thickens...it was pretty and uncomplicated by overthinking, saying what you want and mean to say and all the more effective and heartfelt for it. Probably a good lesson. Liked the repeated/slightly changed line in the middle too.