Чуть-Чуть

By Ewan

Tue, 27 Jan 2009
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4 comments
 

Almost famous,
not quite brilliant,
nearly published -
scarcely coherent
barely understood
no more than enough.

Чуть-Чуть is a hair's breadth
from something, a sliver
more or a smidgeon less
or only just sufficient.

Almost verses
not quite poetry
nearly beautiful
scarcely meaningful
barely interesting
no more than ever.

Чуть-Чуть: is it enough?

Certificate U
Poem
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by tamara on
Wow!This Is more than enough!It is fantastic!

Submitted by jennifer on
Isn't that a question better directed at a publisher? ;P J x p.s. superb offering!

 

Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
Great stuff! Chris X

Submitted by Ewan on
"Is this a reference to an obscure 80s pop song by some big fat black woman whose name I can't remember, called "Don't mess with my choot-choot"?" No. 'I hope this helps.' You, perhaps.

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