Counting
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By Ewan
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In the valley
away from the copse,
the spinney, the wood
the forest,
far from the wolf,
and the rare bold fox.
a man with his rood
his dog, his pipe,
is counting.
Yan, Tyan, Tethera,
at the shearing time,
the blades click and clack
for three black sheep
and three bags fine.
You count methera,
as we ofters swive,
the seed slick and quick
give four babes dead
and four alive.
I count pimp
at the ale house door
the pumps pull and push,
for five strong beers
and five beers more.
Sethera
lucky, lucky six:
the young boy gathers
the kindling sticks.
Dethera
we are lately seven,
one child more
and we have heaven.
Hovera
the hour may be eight,
I send the boy
to close the gate
Lovera
the wool-filled sacks they number nine
what mite we make
is never mine.
We count, we count all the days of our lives,
we count the kisses we gave to our wives,
we count the ripples as the kingfisher dives,
we count the cuts from words like knives.
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Comments
This has a rather pleasing nursery tale feel
I absolutely loved the final line . . . back to reality!
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what a beautiful rhythm this
what a beautiful rhythm this has - like a lullaby - you could hypnotise someone with it!
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Wonderful use of words and
Wonderful use of words and rhythm. As insert says, really hypnotic.
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This wonderful poem is our
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I like the lilting tone and
I like the lilting tone and the sense of kinship.
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Beware - the rhythm will
Beware - the rhythm will lodge in your mind, and you'll find yourself murmuring this at random points during the day. It's our Poem of the Week - congratulations!
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Such a beautiful rendering of
Such a beautiful rendering of sounds. Dylan or Betjeman are conjured. Woven in time.
Parson Thru
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