In the Heat of the Day
By Ewan
Tue, 14 Jul 2009
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I'd write, but my synapses
are treacle slow in the heat.
My brain stirs, relapses
into torpor; the slow beat
of the fakir's pulse oozing
through swollen veins,
large not just from boozing
but other heat-alleviated pains.
Maybe a rope-trick escape
from this writer's bed of nails
will come - if I truly scrape
the barrel and describe what ails
me most, besides the lack of inspiration
that brings about this verse of desperation.
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air conditioning? : )
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air conditioning? : )
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chuck you are showing your
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chuck you are showing your age!
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Gorgeous word selection,
Gorgeous word selection, making for a truly textural poem.
Lovely work.
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I do agree with Sikander -
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I do agree with Sikander - and I love the structure of this poem. sarah
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Times have obviously changed
Times have obviously changed for Britons abroad IPNH. In my day we'd send coolie chaps into the mountains for ice. Even had dancing girls with fans.
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you're making me laugh chuck
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you're making me laugh chuck - coolie chaps and dancing girls, my arse
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Looks like you've cured your
Looks like you've cured your block, Ewan - it's great! :-)
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Good Work!, first time ive
Good Work!, first time ive commented on your work, but I have read some other pieces of yours and thought they where really good also.
Lennie
Lennie
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Nice one Ewan; I feel the
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Nice one Ewan; I feel the same except it's bloody freezing here.
Chris
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