the perfect moment....
By fieryfiredragon
Tue, 09 Feb 2010
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Walking through the woods,
surrounded by people of all kind,
moving here, there, everywhere,
being pulled by a feeling of knowingness,
as though following a divine plan,
eyes that were wandering,
stopped suddenly,
as if not willing to move any farther,
as if the moment was frozen in eternity,
when they rested on a face,
so new, yet familiar.
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'frozen' is the past tense
'frozen' is the past tense of 'to freeze'
Great image created, though, by the poem.
J x
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