Two Fans

By Frances Macaulay Forde

Thu, 18 Sep 2014

2 comments

Two fans enthusiasically spin amongst

a pile of rubbish waiting for pick up,

roadside.

Through wind and rain, even thunder

“Look at me!” but nothing moved.

Clever stack.

Unlike No 2’s plant pots. Scattered.

Colourful rattles voicing the gusts.

Messy!

Drive-bys; inspection opportunists.

Recycling on a budget or business,

who knows?

Roadside shopping has rules. Don’t

muddle. Re-stack after inspection.

Carefully.

It’s bad manners to sort, scrounge,

accept or reject – pull apart, untidy,

then go.

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Permalink Submitted by Parson Thru on Thu, 2014-09-18 08:39

I like this observation, Frances. Feels like a daydream out of a window. Very sparingly rendered. Good for the imagination.

Parson Thru

Permalink Submitted by Frances Macaula... on Fri, 2014-09-26 02:15

Thanks Kevin, your time and attention is appreciated.