Field Mice
By GregJHanks
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A sorrowing wolf wandered into a grove
filled with the busy of strange field mice.
Carefully, he stepped, each paw with delicate gate.
His eyes were low, his heart ached.
For at last the time had come.
No one spoke, only left;
to here, to there, to places better left unsaid.
There were a few,
who, when spoken to,
would sway and twirl, just to be rid of the world.
And some would cry and some would binge.
Some would cringe and others could laugh.
But few were devout to their selves—
‘Silly’ ones, with notions of the utmost absurd.
There was work, much toil, don’t forget that,
and even more talk, which was equally kept.
The wolf considered in himself,
‘How frivolous and full of chaff
these tiny mice put every task.
If only they could see the danger
and the awe
of a coming frost.
or a tromping predator.’
Shaking his head, the wolf cried,
and thought on a few last ones
of which he had grown to love,
to which such adoration brought turmoil and strife
to their quick, little lives.
A silent mourning for them he took.
Careful to write them in his book.
Before the Old Gray took his fill,
He thought,
‘It’s a shame I cannot now sit and watch them drill.’
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I liked the depth to this
I liked the depth to this animal fable. I started by searching for a moral eg 'the mice have a better life than the wolf' or an antimoral eg 'it's no use working together as happy busy little rodents, Old Gray will have us all for din-dins'. There are still layers of meaning left.....Elsie
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or a tromping predator.’Not
or a tromping predator.’Not sure about the word tromping, it put me in mind of an elehpant, where I think a predator should have a more stealthy description but other than that a lovely nature piece. Much enjoyed.
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Tromping .. never heard that
Tromping .. never heard that word, but it's a good 'un!
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