Last Commute
By HaiAnh
Mon, 13 Apr 2009
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I took her on the wrong route.
Is it this one that is more beautiful?
Or was I sitting a different way
so I see the last of my journeys
more beautifully? Because I know
that shortly I will fill each field
with brick and tarmac
and populate nothing with people
and see with windows
and swap hedges for walls
and build myself in like a pharaoh
so the sun only shows itself
once a day
at the end of the street
and a single cloud appears
like an offering, above an office block.
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I love the precision of this
I love the precision of this poem, So accurate and revealing, and poignant, with so few words. Perfect.
anipani
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