Stringing Sentences Together

By harveyjoseph

Mon, 07 Oct 2013
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Particularly in windy weather

I like to string sentences together

and let them

flap, bluster and blow until

,eventually, I let them

go and watch them climb high

and diminish

until their loose and free

is finished.

Particularly in windy weather

I like to string sentences together.

Certificate 12
Poem
Autobiography

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Submitted by scratch on

Good poem harveyjoseph.  There is a little need of some TLC - a misplaced comma (a simple formatting issue). Well done.