Stringing Sentences Together
By harveyjoseph
Mon, 07 Oct 2013
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Particularly in windy weather
I like to string sentences together
and let them
flap, bluster and blow until
,eventually, I let them
go and watch them climb high
and diminish
until their loose and free
is finished.
Particularly in windy weather
I like to string sentences together.
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Good poem harveyjoseph.
Good poem harveyjoseph. There is a little need of some TLC - a misplaced comma (a simple formatting issue). Well done.
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